Talk:Nectar/@comment-104.52.207.234-20201123163953

WOW THIS IS SO GOOD!!!

May I add some onto her page?

Nectar grew up with obedient SilkWing servants, giving her a certainty that she was better than them. That may have given her the habit of tilting her snout up superiorly and looking disdainfully at SilkWings, especially her servants. She was raised by (if Stingless or Overgrowth, than put that instead of mine) Gadfly (female) and Buzz (male). Maybe you could put a little about how she met Trench there (Ex. Nectar met Trench, a NightWing-SeaWing hybrid in/at _____ on Pyhirra/Pantala.

and maybe fix 'She is to be a spy for Queen Wasp she still is. She fakes being a spy for LeafWings and made up things HiveWings do while Wasp's plot is kept secret.' to 'She is currently a spy for Queen Wasp and infiltrates the LeafWings, telling them lies about what HiveWings are doing (if that's what you meant by made up things HiveWings do) while Wasp's plot is kept secret'. I just think the grammar is a little off there, sorry. I don't know about this wiki so these are all just suggestions. Also, Oak is on this page as a dragonet, but Basilisk is on Trench's page. Is that a mistake?

Hope this helps!